
After what felt like eons, he finally held her hand. Gently at first, just the tip of his fingers caressing her fingers. Gradually, with every puff of his cigarette, his hold on her hand became more assured. And they sat like that, for what seemed like hours...
She wished the evening would never end. To sit under the shade of a benevolent tree, letting their coffee go cold, and rain gently cascading from the leaves of the tree... Saying nothing, doing nothing. A beautiful, unbroken silence. As if the silence passed on a secret understanding between them. And they sat like that, holding hands, each afraid to let go. He wondered what she was thinking. That sublime, unfathomable pleasantness, which spread in his heart,did she feel it too? And all this while, she tried to read his eyes, read his heart. She saw a deep happiness there... and something else she could not understand.
And still it rained, and they sat where they were, cocooned in their world of unsurity and delight, of silent conversations and a feeling of nothingness...
17 comments:
like it ! like it! super like it!
Naaaice! Someone seems to be in a morantic mood ;)
your writing is wonderful
beautiful....& RAIN has to make an appearance :-)
"cocooned in their world of unsurity and delight, of silent conversations and a feeling of nothingness..."
I have words to what i feel often these days...
Thank you. :)
How on earth did I miss reading this??!! Loved it .. every bit of it!!
@Doll: thank you! thank you! thank you very very much! :D
~and welcome.
@Blunt Edges: yeah..aksar baarish ke mausam mein aisa bhi ho jaata hai :P
@Leah C: *Blush* Thank you so much. And welcome to my blog. :)
@Ekta: How can there be no rain here? ;)
@Caramel: :D Your comment is so beautiful.. every time I read it, my heart smiles. Thank you so much!
@B&B: muah! Thank you so much girl.. your words inspire me no end.
Reading this piece brought back faint memories of a once flaming love; the warmth that motionlessly grows in your heart came to me when I read this. I miss that feeling, so thank you. :)
@Nomora: Perhaps its time to fall in love again? :D that is a wonderful feeling, though.. the first flush of love.. <3
Yes it is a wonderful feeling :)
It seems difficult though to move out of that comfort zone after recovering from a broken heart... I sound like a whiner right there, god.
Sweet! I like what you write, its simple, yet powerful.
:)
@akriti: thank you so much :D very sweet of you
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