Sunday, August 14, 2011

The Perfect Senseless Poem

Corrupted expectations
futile, wrong
I can see the end - or can I?
for I still can't stop

Morbidity shadows me
and I follow melancholy
or is it the other way around?

not just a cup of coffee you label too bitter
another spoon of sugar
how much is too little?

♥ ♥ ♥


blunt edges said...

Hahaha! Love the title! :D

Rain Girl said...

@blunt edges: it *is* perfect, no? ;)

Eloise said...

this poem is really good! well done! and by the way i love the blog!! woah! following!

Rain Girl said...

@Eloise: :D Thank you so much!! It is comments like yours that make me feel like writing again... very kind of you. :) And thanks for the follow!

shy poet said...

No poem is senseless
the words are too important to be trivial, your talent is great.

Rain Girl said...

@Shy Poet: Thank you so much. :) And welcome here.

The words, perhaps, are important.. but they won't make sense to a lot of people. Sometimes, am not sure, if they ever make sense to me too.