Saturday, October 2, 2010

This is what I write when I stay up too late

Emptiness and desolation
melancholy and angry passion
a Mahabharata between them
inside me
they all want a piece
a piece is all I have

I know it will end
one day, for sure
but today is difficult
today hurts
and tomorrow
always remains tomorrow

20 comments:

Rain Girl said...

Oh man. This is crap :P

blunt edges said...

I read your post and I have this serious geeky look on my face and then I read your comment and I burst out laughing! :D

PS: It's pretty neat :)

Amrita said...

no. i love it.

a piece is all i have..
and tom remains tom..
:)

Ricky said...

Love your little snippets of poems :D

@ngad said...

I like this!!!

Ekta said...

me too...love it...
fav lines 'a piece is all i have' & 'tomorrow remains tomorrow'.

ani_aset said...

very simple and profound :)

AmitL said...

Hi, Rain Girl-this is nice-your random thoughts always bring forth gems.:) (On the brighter side,have u heard a song from Kasme Vaade-Aati Rahengi Bahaarein, Jaati Raheingi Bahaarein..it's one of my light mood favourites('I know it will end'...the line reminded meof the song, somehow)

rainboy said...

nice
I feel kind of same these days :)

bearhugs sis

Beauty and the BEast said...

Lost. Completely and utterly. Feel like I am in a horror movie, you know one where everything looks so hauntingly beautiful, that you wonder how something so wonderful can give you the eerie feeling?

Rain Girl said...

@Blunt Edges: Lol! You had me laughing after reading your comment :P tried so hard to imagine Calvin with a serious geeky look :P

p.S: thanks!

Rain Girl said...

@Amrita: thanks girl :)

Rain Girl said...

@Ricky: :D shukriya.. love your sweet lil comments

Rain Girl said...

@angad: welcome here - and thank you :)

Rain Girl said...

@Ekta: mine too ... that's how things are na... :)

Rain Girl said...

@ani_aset: thank you :)

Rain Girl said...

@AmitL: love that song .. :) its beautiful :) you are right about it :)

Rain Girl said...

@Beauty & Beast: yes I know about that feeling... am feeling bad that I made you feel that way - though I know its a compliment in a way - so thanks girl :) but shake off this feeling .. its just words, after all :)

anamika said...

hahaha...your comment made so much of difference to your poem:)

Rain Girl said...

@anamika: good or bad? :P