Sunday, August 1, 2010

A Loser of a Poem

chaotic thoughts
again
bitter bitter
disappointment,
oh, so bitter

no matter what you say
and you...
no matter what you do
I always fail
Like I always do

am no field of flowers
after a spring rain
try hailstorm on a rainbow
and a failure's bitter pain

assumptions, and then rejections
useless, hopeless, heartless?
and my guts are gone for a long walk
"Its raining.." they said.

15 comments:

rainboy said...

I so want to write a sad piece but I couldn't..this year was supposed to be awesome right??

I guess I've started pretending that I am happy when I am not.


I loved this poem sis...heartfelt.

my guts have been eclipsed :(

take care...
bearhugs

陳梁雅雯宗翰 said...

婚姻對男人來說是賭他的自由,對女人而言卻是賭她的幸福。.................................................................

Beauty and the BEast said...

:( Its beautiful and its tragic... despite the troubled thoughts it is very well written..

Hope you find rainbows in rain sprinkled skies...

sakhii•• said...

awesome awesome awesome!!

Amrita said...

:( :( :( so <3

建邱勳 said...

君子立恆志,小人恆立志。............................................................

Rain Girl said...

@rainboy: I like this line.. my guts have been eclipsed.. no year, no period of time can be completely happy.. no matter how short or how long... for roses come with thorns.. cliche as it is.. it is true..

Rain Girl said...

@B&B: a compliment from you on a poem is like a rainbow indeed :)

Rain Girl said...

@sakhi: thanks so much..

Rain Girl said...

@Amrita: I know.. <3

AmitL said...

ohh..very tragic,yet,very nice..specially'guts gone for a long walk'

commited to life said...

hey its amazing,,

but dont forget brightest rainbows comes after hardest rains

Rain Girl said...

@Amitl: my favorite line, too

Rain Girl said...

@committed to life: I cannot forget anything...

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