Saturday, April 10, 2010

♥ scrambled love ♥

my silence begs you for your voice
say something, please
ordinary becomes enchanting
when you speak...
but you don't!
such a tease, no?
and haunting, haunting dreams
of your voice
whispering, cajoling
tantalising...
you don't let me sleep...


so much love in my heart
it overflows and drowns me
am floating in your love
yet very soon I will choke
come soon
and take your share
least i die
waiting for you
and your love kills me
...a beautiful death


"पहले आती थी हाल-ऐ-दिल पे हसी
अब नहीं आती..."
-ghalib  




p.s.: did this make sense? writing poetry after ages.. feel all wooden and unsure...

28 comments:

Ricky said...

I am unable to read the Ghalib shayari but the poem is beautiful...like all your poems...small words deep meaning :)

Shoe Girl said...

loved it.... especially " your love kills me " .... read up all the last few posts as well:) always refreshing to read your blog

Beauty and the BEast said...

everything about love makes sense to the one who has faith in romance :P

Touching, inviting... pleading.. to love and be loved

:*

sakhii•• said...

awesome....specially d first stanza...gr8...wonderful!!

Ekta said...

sure does...makes a lot of sense to me. Love the post title too..'Scrambled Love'. How can you write so well rain girl?

rainboy said...

excellent as always :)

于名于倫 said...

用行動來支持你~~~不留言不行!.........................

AmitL said...

Hi, Rain Girl-grt to be back here..let me add ur name to my blogroll,so I remember.:)Nice to see ur poem...:)
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As for Ghalib's-a bit deep.:)

♫♪♥W!nK♥♪♫ said...

The poem made a lot of sense :) I Loved It !!
Do write more poems :)
Take Care!!

rain girl said...

@Ricky: Sorry :P I increased the font size now...

and bahut bahut shukriyaa.. :)

rain girl said...

@ShoeGirl: aww tahnks girl :)

rain girl said...

@B&B:everything about love makes sense to the one who has faith in romance :P

this description suits you aptly ;)

rain girl said...

@sakhi.. thank you so much... :) encouragement always helps.. :)

rain girl said...

@Ekta.. first of all, thank you! and about writing well, I don't know about that..but as far as writing is concerned... I just let out whatever is inside.. of course, if its raining, it really helps :P

rain girl said...

@rainboy: makhhanbaaz :P

rain girl said...

@AmitL.. Ghalib always have a way of conveying emotions not always easily expressed.. yet so simply...

rain girl said...

@Wink: awww thankuuuuuuuuu.. I was so scared when i posted this poem.. :P but I guess I should get over this and write more.. thanks so much!

hugs :)

♫♪♥W!nK♥♪♫ said...

Yep. Do post more poems :) I'm waiting to read them!
And also, check out my new poem :)
Take Care!!

rain girl said...

@Wink: just did girl :)

♫♪♥W!nK♥♪♫ said...

Thank you so much.
Don't be scared :)
*Feel Good Hugz*

rain girl said...

@Wink... *thank you hug*

♫♪♥W!nK♥♪♫ said...

:) How old are you by the way? Rain Boy's your brother?
I love these names..Rain Boy and Rain Girl. How sweet :p

rain girl said...

@Wink... my age? lolz.. am wayyy, way older than you.. am turning 27 this weekend :P and truth be told, I don't like it :|

and yes, Rain Boy is my sweet brother :D I have been Rain Girl for more than 5 years now.. and he joined I guess a year back - or is it two, brother?

rainboy said...

rainboy is Three years old ;D

rain girl said...

@rainboy.. OMG!! :D

blunt edges said...

lovely...n the ghalib line was the icing...loved it :)

rain girl said...

@blunt edges: ji bahut shukriya.. ;)

李妍妮 said...

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