Thursday, February 12, 2009

देहलीज़

तुम्हारे मेरे कमरे के बीच का दरवाज़ा
इसे खुला ही रखना
तुम्हारी खुशबू मुझ तक आती रहे
रात भर मेरे सपनो को मह्काती रहे।

जो यह दिवार सी है दरमयान
बेशक गिराना मत इसको
मगर इस दरवाज़े को खुला ही रखना
मैं सीख लूँगी एक दिन, यह देहलीज पार करना।

- result of reading too much of Amrita Pritam's and Gulzar's poetry

17 comments:

Khamakha said...

really nice:)

Prakhar said...

ufffff...m floored!

Khoobsurat hai!

Voice said...

prakhar recommended your blog..

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it is really nice

marvin the paranoid android said...

as usual, your choice in sher-o-shayari is impeccable...

shahid said...

great piece of poetry with some thoughtful lines

keep writing :)

d gypsy! said...

brilliant..

keep on reading .... pls.. :)

rain girl said...

@khamakha.. thank you dear :)

rain girl said...

@prakhar.... bahut, bahut shukriya :)

rain girl said...

@Voice.. thank you so much. and welcome here :)

rain girl said...

@Marvin... my choice? i hope that was a compliment for my poem and not for the kinds of poets i read... :P

rain girl said...

@shahid.. thank you, and welcome to my blog. :)

rain girl said...

@d gypsy.. thank you.. and yes, i will.

gomu said...

WOW. WOW. this is so beautiful. :) >:D<

rain girl said...

@gomu.. thank you so much - n good to c you back :)

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ani_aset said...

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this is superb..blogrolling you :)

rain girl said...

@ani.. thanks so much.. :)