Wednesday, January 7, 2009

सुलझे अनसुलझे ख्याल

पलकों की कपकपाहट
रातों को सोने नही देती
तुम्हारी आखों की उदासी
हमें रोने नही देती

आधी रात के बाद, और सुबह से पहले का वो वक्त, हमेशा उसे उसकी याद दिलाता था। उसकी बातें, जैसे ओस की बूंदों सी ज़हन में चमकती थी। उसकी बातें, जैसे धुप की चादर। उसकी बातें, जैसे बारिश का पैगाम। उसकी बातें, जैसे सूनेपन में एक दरार। उसकी बातें, जैसे जिंदा होने का एहसास।

उसकी बातें...

25 comments:

Khamakha said...

:) anmol wachan :P

marvin the paranoid android said...

nice nice...

Mystique Wanderer said...

there was this ghazal written by someone, sung by jagjit and chitra...it is actually two poems intertwined...infact it was used in some film also...though i cant remember which...neways it goes like:

Ishq mein gairate jazbaat ne rone naa diya
varna kya baat thi kis baat ne rone naa diya
Ishq mein gairate jazbaat neee...
Yaar ko maine mujhe yaar ne Sone naa diya
raat bhar taal-a-bedar ne sone naa diya
Yaar ko maine mujhe yaar neee...


Aap kehte the k rone se naa badalenge naseeb
Umarr bhar aapki ish baat ne rone naa diya
varna kya baat thi kis baat ne rone naa diya


Ek sabgul bule betaab k jaage naa naseeb
Pehlu-a-gul ne kabhi khaar ne sone naa diya
Yaar ko maine mujhe yaar ne...


Unse milkar hamein rona tha bohat rona tha
Tangi-a-waqte mulakaat ne rone naa diya
Ishq mein gairate jazbaat ne



Raat bhar ki dil-a-betaab ne baatein mujhse
ranj-o-mehanat k kiraftar ne sone naa diya
Yaar ko maine mujhe yaar ne....


Rone waalo se kaho unka bhi rona role
jinko majboori-a-halat ne rone naa diya


Ishq mein gairate jazbaat ne rone naa diya
Ishq mein gairate jazbaat ne
Yaar ko maine mujhe yaar ne...
Ishq mein gairate jazbaat ne

rain girl said...

@khamakha.... acha ji :P

rain girl said...

@marvin the paranoid android...

ya ya

rain girl said...

@MW..beautiful ghazal...and thanks so much for sharing...strange though, I had a huge collection of their ghazals at home, but never got to listen to this one..

..Unse milkar hamein rona tha bohat rona tha
Tangi-a-waqte mulakaat ne rone naa diya....

Beauty and the BEast said...

What adjective do I use now? Touching? Sweet? Romantic?? they somehow dont even come close to mark..

You know, when you are sitting alone lost in some thought.. You suddenly feel someone's around. SO you sort of snap out of your reverie and look about and find yourself .. well, quite alone... But nonetheless you smile...??

I felt something like that after reading this..

rain girl said...

@Beauty... awwwwwww.. i LOVE how you described it... :)

and if I made you smile, it was worth it.. :)

Khamakha said...

bful ghazal...!

Prakhar said...

luvly :)
**उसकी बातें, जैसे जिंदा होने का एहसास** beautiful

rain girl said...

@prakhar.... shukriya, sir..:)

oo7 said...

This sure an amalgamation of a lot of emotions..i loVe it sis..take care

Ricky said...

Kya khoobsurat panktiyan likhe hain aapne. Aapke baaton ke kya kehne :)

rain girl said...

@007... thanks brother *hugs* missed u around..

rain girl said...

@Ricky... ji bahut hi shukriya.. :)

Rajtilak Bhattacharjee said...

तकीए पर तेरे सर का वोह टीप्पा हैं, पढ़ा हैं
चादर मैं तेरे जीसम की वोह सौंधी सी खुशबू
हाथों मैं महेकता हैं तेरे चहेरे का अहसाश
माथे पर तेरे होठों की मोहर लगी हैं

तू इतनी करीब हैं की तुझे देखू कैसे
थोडी सी अलग हो तो तेरे चहेरे को देखू

rain girl said...

@ Rajtilak.. that was beautiful.. did u wrote it?

and welcome here ..

Rajtilak Bhattacharjee said...

Jee shukriya. Aur nahi, yeh nazm meri nahi, Gulzaar Saab ki likhi hui hain :)

rain girl said...

ah! gulzar.. no wonder.. :)

Voice said...

good one

ani_aset said...

reminds me of jagjit singhs number
"uski baatein to phool ho jaise" :)
nice one

tegmeet kaur said...

aasmaano mein udh k kahuin ya paniyon mein doooob kahuin...aaj mudaton baad lagaa k kisi ko bahut khooob kahuin.....
bahut khoob rain girl....

rain girl said...

@Voice... thank you so much.. am so sorry am so late in this :P

rain girl said...

@ani_aset: aww that's an amazing ghazal.. god, i don't even come close to that, but thanks so much!:)

rain girl said...

@tegmmet kaur: na ro ke kehna, na pani mein doob ke kehna, itna hi arz hai aapse, jo bhi kehna hamein, bus ek baar muskara ke kehna..


bahut bahut shukriya!

:) and welcome here!