Monday, December 29, 2008

these days


sharp tongue. damp pillows. hazy vision. surreal life. clouds in my room. a place to hide. a place to run away to. bleeding feet. unspoken words. torturous silence. beautiful dreams. morbid nightmares. scratches on heart. salty cheeks. cold comfort. a distant death. a faraway life. chaos of thoughts...

15 comments:

oo7 said...

yeh kya tha re?? :O

Mystique Wanderer said...

dante's divine comedy...was never meant as a piece of fiction

rain girl said...

@007.. nothing..just a collage of thoughts..:)

rain girl said...

@Mystique wanderer.... welcome here...

and i couldn't understand that what you were trying to say..

Mystique Wanderer said...

the seven hells that a person has to go through...even though the book was written as a piece of imagination...we all go through them in our life...

rain girl said...

@MW..ohh you meant it that way.... profound.. :)

rain girl said...

@MW...by the way, your skull is scaring me :(

Mystique Wanderer said...

yeah...the skull...can't help it..it comes with being MW...if u read some of my posts in the past few weeks you'll understand why

rain girl said...

@MW.. i have...but which blog u mean here..i hope not all of them :P

Mystique Wanderer said...

to make things simpler for readers...i copy post...everything i do in other blogs onto the elephants tail...ofcourse except the erotica blog :P

rain girl said...

@MW.. sorry, but it still seems....not you.. your posts are not gothic or morbid....pretty normal they are...speckled here and there with wisdom and frankness.... your stories, yes, do have melancholy but not enough to justify a skull

...still, am sorry, it shouldn't be any of my business.... :)

Mystique Wanderer said...

http://theelephantstail.blogspot.com/2008/12/if-only-i-couldnt-write-this-post.html

http://theelephantstail.blogspot.com/2008/12/what-if.html

http://theelephantstail.blogspot.com/2008/12/duur-hai-tu.html

rain girl said...

@MW.. ok, ok.... :P you win.. keep the skull and add some blood to..and oh, make it blacker :P

lekshmi said...

dear stranger..
i dont have the slightest idea wat to write here..your words are strong and beautiful and they have struck a chord in there somewhere. and forced me to put something down here

some how i understand it all... god bless

rain girl said...

@lekshmi... you have no idea how much that meant to me... thank you so much... :) and welcome here!